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All I see is you,
The beauty of your face illuminates
My days, my nights, my life.
All I want is you,
Your warmth, your touch, your love.
All I need is you,
Your support, your comprehension.
You are my reason of survival
So, darling, please, stay with me.
The beauty of your face illuminates
My days, my nights, my life.
All I want is you,
Your warmth, your touch, your love.
All I need is you,
Your support, your comprehension.
You are my reason of survival
So, darling, please, stay with me.
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I know you were trying to create emphasis with the "All I ... is you" every two lines, but since the other lines don't rhyme together it just comes off as a hit and miss for me.
Don't take this personally, it is just my very humble opinion.